Harindhar Reddy

Freshman - 852 Points (Sept/19/1983 / Haliya, Hyderabad, India)

Jack's Soul At His Teacher's Magic Show - - Dual-Double-Etheree - Poem by Harindhar Reddy

(((A Poem with an Experiment with new Words)))
I
Zing!
Hari-
Simba roared
In varsity
Known - agname Crichton,
Whiz of words with their buzz,
Hermann of tick-talks - saga
-city on topics of plenty -
Celeb showcased talent, sharing his
Dukedom nonstop, found in our ground, hara!
He treed ash-keys of Noether, mizzled with
Love, harbored tiny shoots, helped in growth
To produce morrow's dreams - he taught
Tots With touch Midas, shaping,
Beating, dust and clay. Zow!
Guru, we stood close,
Zazz, glory Spread
Gladness wed
as you
led.

II

Zoinks,
Keeping
All isms and
Etiquettes in
Clay-bay, ah, he made
Learning an astounding
Biz of cricket - 'I'm Consuming
Namby-pamby anatomy
Lecture - Greek unlike his fun filled show'.
Baseball, football, his class's a sports hall, jeez.
Kalam's vision blurred, horse sense stirred, Winston's
Words stuttered, batty, bonkers, crazy
Crackers drive tankers and tears fill, stock
Still in me as year ends. 'I
Know how to teach - doves to
Coo, desks to dance, board
To chant Idioms
In English',
Said he,
Razz!

(Theme: Teacher-student Relationship)

Harindhar Reddy on 15/08/2012

(Inspired by G.M.Hopkins and thanks to Charles Darnell for naming Hopkins)

Topic(s) of this poem: teacher


Poet's Notes about The Poem

by (C) Copyright @ Harindhar Reddy on 15/08/2012
Glossary/Novel words
1) Simba = lion 2) agname = other name 3) sagacity = the mental ability to understand and discriminate between relations 4) ash-keys = planted by Noether (a German mathematician)
(*Note: Hara-hari = Oh my god (a new word coined by me, Hara = Lord Shiva and Hari is lord Vishnu (Hindu mythology 2. Clay-bay = at clay and at bay (a new word coined by me by clipping and combining) . Hope you enjoy my creating new words. Dear LIONIZED poets, your review on these my new word is duly appreciated. Waiting for Your RESPONSE.....................)

Form: Etheere: The Etheree is a popular internet verse form, it can be found mentioned at most sites that provide verse form descriptions. It is a simple progressive syllabic verse. It is attributed to American poet Etheree Taylor Armstrong and can be found at Poetry Base and Shadow Poetry.

The Etheree is:
a decastich. (10 line poem)
syllabic,1-2-3-4-5-6-7-8-9-10 syllables per line.
unrhymed.
focused on 1 idea or subject.

Double Etheree is 2 Etherees back to back making up one poem. The syllable count is 1-2-3-4-5-6-7-8-9-10-10-9-8-7-6-5-4-3-2-1.
Reverse Etheree is simply an Etheree turned upside down. The syllable count begins with 10 and sequentially runs thru 1.

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Poem Submitted: Wednesday, August 15, 2012

Poem Edited: Thursday, November 13, 2014


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