January 13,2012 Comments

A sublime start with a nice poem, Naomi. You may like to read my poem, Love And Lust. Thank you.

Wandering thoughts of 'mixed emotions' beautifully expressed in the poem. 'I have to keep walking, running, escaping...from you' - These words eloquently describe your state of mind. 'People cry not because they are weak It's because they have been strong for too long' - Well said! So deeply felt! 'You were a great friend Now it's time for my heart to mend... ' - A touching acknowledgement. This poem deserves 10/10 from me. So have I given it.

i love it! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! beautiful definately a ten

Simplicity is the style and quality of your poem, the way you start and end the poem is praise worthy, you are really a talented one, your wording and the poetical diction is properly appropriate, the flow of the poem is like a gushing water, and blowing like a wind making a sound soothing to soul and storming the brain, and very musical to ears, I wish I had written this poem….the theme is original and the poem is well crafted and well composed poem those qualities made the poem a everlasting a piece of fine art…I like poem very much and I will also like you thoughtful on my poems, especially ‘’I want to die’’