Jealousy Poem by hali collins

Jealousy

Rating: 5.0


jealousy is something to fear
eating away at what is left
my screams, my cries,
why dont they awaken you
why cant you hear me
im dissapperaing into thin air
im lost and cant find my way
my thoughts are pulling me under
why do i think this way
is this just a bad dream
wake me from this nightmare
jealousy is driving me insane
so im just going to flush away the pain
this feeling is gone
im done with this thought

Monday, July 18, 2011
Topic(s) of this poem: eating,jealousy
COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Mohammad Akmal Nazir 18 July 2011

Nice poem composed with vivid imagery. I liked the theme very much. Kudos to your skill. Keep it up. I rated it 10. Thanks for sharing..... I shall be highly obliged if you please read and rate my poem 'A world of treason' on page 4. Thanks in advance. Warmest regards Akmal

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