Jet Wheels - Haiku Poem by Seema Jayaraman

Jet Wheels - Haiku



Chasing home caravan
of towering nimbus clouds
jet wheels kiss tarmac
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Seema Jayaraman, Mumbai,8 May 2016

Monday, May 9, 2016
Topic(s) of this poem: cloud,flying
POET'S NOTES ABOUT THE POEM
Wrote this Haiku while flying back to Mumbai from Calicut
COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Unnikrishnan E S 09 May 2016

Hi Seema, your haiku depicts the touchdown, when the plane's wheels kiss the runway, in a haste. As you hurry home (your home) , the caravan of the clouds, though chased by all the way, could be flying, on the way home (their home) . Nice little poem. Pl keep writing and posting.

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