Journey Through The Dark Poem by Sarah Chowdhury

Journey Through The Dark

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You can see the shine, but I can't see,
I sometimes give up and say, "just succumb to fate",
As I force myself to break free and liberate.
I try my best even though there is no guarantee.
Every progress I make, makes me think,
Does my hard work worth everything I have done?
Just want to see the shine of the sun.
Will I ever get out of the dark and find life's link?

I see a shovel making a hole,
After all the path that led me astray.
Hit something that created an outsized spark,
That gave water to the seeds of my soul,
Opening for me a new life's way.
Sunshine strikes after the journey through the dark.

Journey Through The Dark
Wednesday, October 30, 2019
Topic(s) of this poem: helpless,depression
COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Lyn Paul 03 November 2019

We have to experience lows to reach highs. No one sees life without some darkness. When you see what you have overcome in a dark moment that should bring you one step forward. You are expressing your feeling and that is a huge step forward. All the best to you.

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Jazib Kamalvi 30 October 2019

Write comment. Such an impressive write, Sarah Ch. You may like to read my poem, Love and Iust. Thanks.

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