Wednesday, October 30, 2019

Journey Through The Dark Comments

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You can see the shine, but I can't see,
I sometimes give up and say, "just succumb to fate",
As I force myself to break free and liberate.
I try my best even though there is no guarantee.
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Sarah Chowdhury
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Lyn Paul 03 November 2019

We have to experience lows to reach highs. No one sees life without some darkness. When you see what you have overcome in a dark moment that should bring you one step forward. You are expressing your feeling and that is a huge step forward. All the best to you.

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Jazib Kamalvi 30 October 2019

Write comment. Such an impressive write, Sarah Ch. You may like to read my poem, Love and Iust. Thanks.

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