Lily Espinosa

Just A Thought - Poem by Lily Espinosa

My last few poems have been pretty dull,
All this self pity,
Quite unlike me,
It's not all bad,
Every now and then i get a taste of the old ways,
The happy days,
So i souldn't complain,
Loving family, great friends, a future leading anywhere,
All these things are going for me,
So really,
Things are good.

Comments about Just A Thought by Lily Espinosa

  • (6/4/2005 5:59:00 PM)

    Oh my, you really are on fire! This isn't a poem is it? ..Could that be why i called it 'just a thought'? I don't know about you, but as a rule my thoughts do not include imagery, metaphors or similes..but hey. Thats just me. (Report) Reply

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  • (6/2/2005 4:03:00 PM)

    Glad you're feeling better...but still this is not a poem. (sorry to say.) This is reflective prose. Try some imagery, metaphors, similes, anything that will take this away from the route of prose.

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  • (5/31/2005 5:01:00 PM)

    Well i've written so much depressing stuff lately, i was beginning to bring myself down! ..Thanks by the way. (Report) Reply

  • (5/31/2005 5:33:00 AM)

    I can imagine writing something like this myself, well done on your latest output. (Report) Reply

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Poem Submitted: Sunday, May 29, 2005

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