Thursday, August 8, 2013

Just Breathe Comments

Rating: 5.0

She took a deep breath and let it all out.
She told him all of the things he did not know about.
She raised her eyes up to his not knowing what else she could do.
One look into them and she knew they were through.
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Angela Cox
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Khairul Ahsan 08 August 2013

Excellent. Short but complete.

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Dave Walker 08 August 2013

Short and sweet, a great little poem.

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