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Though, long gone youth shall not return
In mind still young
In body not,
I can't forget those days i yearn,
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Jayne, I struggled with some of your grammar (oh, .....you ARE Welsh! That may explain 'it') . But I did understand your poem I think and approve of your sentiment. bri : )
If you want some welsh grammar Bri. Here's a word for you : ) hollwybodol. Look that one up! Lol : ) : ) : ) Give you something to do apart from playing poetry grammar professor. Lol : )
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12/7/2025 2:54:02 PM # 1.0.0
'yearn' rhymes, but doesn't sound 'right'. I'd look for 'yearn FOR'. ;)