Monday, September 22, 2008

Just One More Lie Comments

Rating: 3.8

each morning and night i see them.i feel all misery birds sing on an ugly theme.

i cry now, i cry 4 ever u said there is no dream nothing to share.
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negar shahnouri
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Anna jonson 26 September 2008

waaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaw tooooooooooo sad but very beautifull

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samar Halabi 26 September 2008

wonderful piece full of truly feelings.....Good Job

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Tj Becker 22 September 2008

what sadness and torment you have written, clinging hard to someone that really isn't worth your time. I wish you well, but it has brought out your talent for wonderful poems.

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