Deepti Agarwal


Just The Other Day.... - Poem by Deepti Agarwal

Just the other day
looking out of my window

I saw
a baby bird learning to fly
queen bee trying to reach the sky..

I found
a pregnant cloud, hovering over
waiting to bring in a shower..

I cherished
the moments to see the bud
blooming in the beauty..

I longed
to satiate my thirst with
the dew drops on leaves..

I cried
wanting to belong
just the other day at my window......!

~23/12/09~


Comments about Just The Other Day.... by Deepti Agarwal

  • (1/6/2010 4:07:00 AM)


    A beautiful poem using the nature to highlight the feeling. Lovely. (Report) Reply

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  • (12/23/2009 12:04:00 PM)


    Enjoyed every word of it. Simply outstanding. (Report) Reply

  • (12/23/2009 6:00:00 AM)


    lovely finishing lines...i cried..wanting to belong'...how lovely...10..into my favs (Report) Reply

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Poem Submitted: Wednesday, December 23, 2009

Poem Edited: Wednesday, March 3, 2010


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