Dawn! Poem by Deepti Agarwal
Dawn!
Why is it so dark here
Why can't my right see my left
Why can't I hear anything
Why the dark Lords are
- holding me tight.
Scaring me to my bones
sending chill through my spine
air is so brittle here
castle of my dreams
- has now crumbeld.
Ah! Look! A Ray of Light
I know after the deep dark
comes the lovely twilight
there is nothing to be scared off
- dawn is about to shine!
~12/12/08~
this held a ending I did not expect. written very well. good job. Crystal
Oh this night is so scary and dark It is gnawing my vitals like a shark But dawn is about the embark soon my life will be filled with joyous sparks............ Good Work..............
Daring write every thought of it expressed what is true people become confuse talk much but understand little it is wise to understand self first!
castle of my dreams - has now crumbeld. Ah! Look! A Ray of Light liked these lines in ur poem. dawn symbolizes hope.. nice
beautiful poem madam.. and the way it unfolds towards brightness from the dark is superb.. well done.. regards prashant
A nice reflection of positivity....! ! Amen... let dawn always shine...
A nice reflection of positivity....! ! Amen... let dawn always shine...
This poem will increasingly dawn on people. The demand for controlling the commanding heights will grow. The difficulties one meets, will resolve by themselves with advancements. One should always proceed and light will dawn with shine and increasing clearness on ones paths.....
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1/14/2025 11:15:24 AM # 1.0.0
the light is on...melting away the darkness...the knowledge and the ignorance...good piece, Deepti...metaphorical 10