Monday, January 25, 2016

Kam Baaton Ka Safar.. Comments

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Kam baaton ka safar
Kitna chota hota hai
Kam main hi simat kar reh jaati hain
Na koi kona
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abhilasha bhatt
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M Asim Nehal 26 January 2016

Wah wah....kya kehna in kam baton ka......Maza aagaya padh kar, , , Loved it.

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Rajnish Manga 26 January 2016

गंभीर से गंभीर बात को भी आप इतनी सहजता से कह जाते हैं कि पाठक चकित रह जाता है. धन्यवाद, अभिलाषा जी. Kitna chota hota hai / Na koi kona / Na koi sira / Kam baaton ka safar Sirf khamoshi main hi tey hota hai

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Mithilesh Yadav 26 January 2016

kaam baaton ka safar....... gazab ki kalam ka parichay....

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Souren Mondal 25 January 2016

'Bas jaante hue bhi anjaane se nazar ate hain Apne hote hue bhi paraaye se nazar ate hain' These lines are simply beautiful. Tumhari jitni kavitaye ab tak mai ne padhi hai, un me ye mujhe shayad sab se zyada chu gayi.. Hum jo thode se 'kavi-typs' hote hai, unke liye sach me bohut mushkil hota hai ke kam baaton se kaam chala le... Bohut hi khoobsurat kavita hai ye Abhilasha.. Sukhriya :)

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