Keep It In The House 9- Poem by DAVID GERARDINO

Keep It In The House 9-

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THREE ghost, a spot of
green, a house full of
evil spirits, and a child
me/trying to find a way
out.
ONE women,
one man,
and a me, watching my mom
get beat, again, and again,
but afterwords, he gives
her flowers and a long
F...K
THREE ghost, one child,
one woman, and a man whos
about to die, in a hunting
trip.AMEN

COMMENTS OF THE POEM

DAVID...YOU DO STRADDLE THE DARKSIDE W/ A PROFOUND AIR OF GUSTO....NICE WRITE...................BY THE WAY...THE MAN WHO DIES ON THE HUNTING TRIP...HE WASN'T WITH DICK CHANEY, NOW WAS HE? ! LOL A TEN FOR DUCKING BUCKSHOT....''''''''''''''''''''''''''''''FRANK

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Gina Onyemaechi 29 January 2006

Another harrowing story told with such engaging bluntness. Regards.

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