Kinda Sexy Comments

I like the noirish feel to this Uriah. The narrative flows well and the rhyme structure makes great play with the words.

Yes Uriah you got it in perfect Tarantino style... great roll models those characters for poetic bouncing ya know? lol Wonderful work. I love it so much. Grinning, jumping on the table with a gun in both hands! ! Hook line and slinger, Tai

The Tango of Death! I really liked this one. Plenty of imagery, a bit of menace - ok, more than a bit - and, yes, it made me laugh as well. Great job! - Will

though this was ace bar the cool/fool rhyme which reminded me of grandmasterflash. Not intrinsically a bad thing but in this case. Still, the rest is excellent

That was such a cool and intence poem. I loved it.10 out of 10 for me.