Knock Over Comments

Sweet longing - modestly said. Very good.

Sweet sadness eloquently expressed. I hope that friendly bird will be your kindred spirit to carry your message home. Sincerely, Sandra

Nimal: Your poem reminds me of a song my father use to sing. It goes like this 'Oh if I had the wings of an angel, over these prison walls I would fly, and I'd fly in the arms of my poor darling, and then I'd be willing to die. your friend.............Dave