Wednesday, March 17, 2010

Labyrinth Comments

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the uneven rhythm of silence
as night pulls the living into
its patchy blanket falls heavy
on the heart’s ears…
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indira babbellapati
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Ranjit Ravindran 17 March 2010

The mind’s labyrinth well projected, On to the dark screen of night; Where the rhythm of silence whispered, Navigational instructions till daylight.

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Sarvesh Kulkarni 17 March 2010

was a little bit vague in the first two stanzas, but then the title is 'labyrinth'! wonderful poem, enjoyable. thank you ma'am.

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Leonard Dabydeen 17 March 2010

Enjoy this read. The rich imagery of the 'labyrinth' emphasizes your presence as a powerful creative artist and poet. Thanx for sharing. Funny thought.....I just submitted this poem: 'This Night Feels So Quiet ' on ph/ws. Blessings. Leonard

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indira babbellapati

indira babbellapati

visakhapatnam, india
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