Lady In Waiting. Poem by Fay Slimm

Lady In Waiting.

Rating: 5.0


For many long moons she had yearned for love.
Weeping deep rivers of tears, she then baited
Her breath and pleasantly smiled, proving
That patience, if honed, can produce wait
Which is rewarded, and now outliving
The need to put on a face which subscibes
To pretence she has melted, forgiving
Her negligent lord, she departs, divided
By love and guilt, her path strewn with doubt
She desperately needs some new light on life.
She remembers no hurts, packs and walks out.
Lady in waiting no more....... this feels right.

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Sue Sie 17 April 2009

Sounds like some compromising and peace has been found...10++ A great write as always Fay...thanks for this Sue

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Fiona Davidson 17 April 2009

Lovely write Fay...your words as always simply flow....Fi 10+++

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Tsira Goge 17 April 2009

Fay, Very beautiful a poem, the woman in white and with hope...10... Thank you, dear... Tsira

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Fay Slimm

Fay Slimm

in Cornwall U.K.
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