Lakeside Veiw Of Life Poem by Brookelyn Walker

Lakeside Veiw Of Life

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The Lake was aflame in the bright morning sun,
The Trees whispered, telling to run.
I took a step, then another,
Quickened pace in both fear and haste.
The waves lapped at the dock,
I reached the end, a weight holding me.
I heard a voice, faint but bold,
'Wait! 'But it's too late
I fell,
Too fast.
Too far.
Too Hard.

POET'S NOTES ABOUT THE POEM
I have no idea why I wrote this... No wait, I do, but I'm not telling.
COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Khairul Ahsan 23 November 2013

'I took a step, then another, Quickened pace in both fear and haste. The waves lapped at the dock, ' Nice expression.

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