Last Gasp Of A Fallen Star Poem by Gary Manning

Last Gasp Of A Fallen Star

Rating: 2.8


I miss you....... and love you... the light that I shined on you was the joy that made my day.... but i've fallen so hard... only now I will ever see is pain and misery... the love I had is gone.. turned to dust from witch I was made. I was your light but you was my day. and now all is lost to the cold and gray. I still see darkness every day yet I can't move nor breath what a way to be' yet in the event of my life that I will rise to be' the most brilliant star that ever ascended back out off the void. Only to shine more! ; even though darkness is all I see. Never forget that I am light and mighty is the truth in me. Ggm

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Romeo Della Valle 08 August 2011

Impressive! Gary! This is a very well penned and poignant write that clearly shows that you have what it takes to get into the Poetry World: TALENT! 10+++ Keep inspiring the World with your thought provoking writes! Love and Peace for always! Romeo from New York City! ...

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