Last Line Poem by Bhartendu Second

Last Line

Rating: 2.9


I am the last
line of her poem

her last poem
that sings
my betrayal
her own faith
in a person

she knew so well
despite all agony and loss

Wednesday, May 4, 2005
Topic(s) of this poem: betrayal,faith,loss,poem
COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Joseph Harskamp 26 September 2006

hm...intresting. my main complaint is that theres no meat to this. you have a good idea here, this is just a skeleton of a poem. add some substance to it.

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Nasra Al Adawi 30 May 2005

Another amazing poem that had touched me so much...keep up writing

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