Bhartendu Second

Rookie (5-7-1970 / India)

Last Line - Poem by Bhartendu Second

I am the last
line of her poem

her last poem
that sings
my betrayal
her own faith
in a person

she knew so well
despite all agony and loss

Comments about Last Line by Bhartendu Second

  • (9/26/2006 1:26:00 PM)

    hm...intresting. my main complaint is that theres no meat to this. you have a good idea here, this is just a skeleton of a poem. add some substance to it. (Report) Reply

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  • Nasra Al Adawi (5/30/2005 10:50:00 AM)

    Another amazing poem that had touched me so much...keep up writing (Report) Reply

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Poem Submitted: Wednesday, May 4, 2005

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