Last Night Together Poem by Way Lenn

Last Night Together

Rating: 5.0


You wore a coat I had seldom seen, maybe twice,
But now it's like a white certainty in my mind.
We stood by that sleek and silver tram and suddenly,
On that night, it had all the frightening potential of a bullet,
That night it would hurt me real bad.

I felt your hair with my cheek and moved my lips
To cling to yours, felt them with all my body before
Moving away.

On the walk home I thought of you on that tram,
Always moving away; I knew that's how it would be,
Always moving away, but I make up tales
Because otherwise it's too unbearable;

Nobody should be asked to suffer for too long in
That truth like cold steel, hard and no comfort.
It would only break this fragile thing.

So I think of you always with a smile on your face.

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Malaya Roses 04 June 2010

the truth is the only real solid substance in human emotion and mind can divert very far away from the truth. separation with hopes to meet again sometimes will drive a man into deeper and deeper love with unrealistic expectation but IN LOVE EVERYTHING IS ACCEPTABLE AND REAL. nice twist of painful goodbye.

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A truly beautiful way to express a final parting and leaving. Some good lines and the magic of tales of alternatives to help survive the pain.10+

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Jessica Kissner 03 June 2010

Thats a beautiful Poem. Very touching. I relate to it a lot.

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