Last Poem Poem by Akhil Zoomin

Last Poem

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Camera Deep Zoom in

I am gonna die

I am gonna die
In a few minutes

My ears are clogged
My eyes are bleeding

I couldn't sit
I can't hold this pen

I don't know what
I am writing

I am jumping here and there
To take a lung full of breathe

But I couldn't

'TELL HER THAT 'I LOVE HER'

is the last sentence he wrote

and the camera deep zoomed out

Akhil Zoomin
Friday, April 10, 2015
Topic(s) of this poem: last supper
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Roseann Shawiak 10 April 2015

Wow! Very intense and heart wrenching poem! All the drama of a movie in a few words. Thank you for sharing. RoseAnn

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Kelly Kurt 10 April 2015

Dramatic poetry. Very nice, Akhil.

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