Last Poem Poem by Akhil Zoomin

Last Poem

Rating: 5.0


Camera Deep Zoom in

I am gonna die

I am gonna die
In a few minutes

My ears are clogged
My eyes are bleeding

I couldn't sit
I can't hold this pen

I don't know what
I am writing

I am jumping here and there
To take a lung full of breathe

But I couldn't

'TELL HER THAT 'I LOVE HER'

is the last sentence he wrote

and the camera deep zoomed out

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Roseann Shawiak 10 April 2015

Wow! Very intense and heart wrenching poem! All the drama of a movie in a few words. Thank you for sharing. RoseAnn

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Kelly Kurt 10 April 2015

Dramatic poetry. Very nice, Akhil.

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