Jaxsun Castro Horn

Freshman - 667 Points (01/01/1981 / Lincoln Nebraska)

Last September - Poem by Jaxsun Castro Horn

Gone are the rays, of summery days
soon castles fade to breaking waves.
Solar and lunar ply shine and rain,
to wallow in splendor, and weep in pain.

Warmth from the Sol come and go.
As Terra and Luna, dance to and fro.
Whilst creatures of land, sea, and air;
the mortal multitudes steadfastly prepare.

A Virgin whisper winds of change,
far beyond Cancer and Leo's range.
With sobering hues of autumnal fashion,
yielding a balance of supernal passions.

Winter's goat tops it's mountain climb,
heralding the gem in 3 days time.
Evening's zinc shimmers through mist,
illuminating her ocean of dancing fish.

Alas, a flame longs an aqueous queen.
Midnight and noon thrones coalesce unseen.
Arcadia exalts their ecliptic surrender,
lest Seraphim weep their last September.

Topic(s) of this poem: philosophical , earth, fall, life and death, moon, nature, romantic sayings, spring, summer, sun

Form: Limerick


Comments about Last September by Jaxsun Castro Horn

  • Chinedu Dike (9/8/2015 7:01:00 PM)


    Beautiful piece of poetry, well articulated and insightfully penned in poetic diction with conviction. A lovely poem written in heightened diction with good rhyme scheme. Thanks for sharing Jaxsun. Please read my poem MANDELA - THE IMMORTAL ICON. (Report) Reply

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  • David Wood (9/3/2015 7:25:00 AM)


    Alas, a flame longs an aqueous queen.
    Midnight and noon thrones coalesce unseen.
    Arcadia exalts their ecliptic surrender,
    lest Seraphim weep their last September.

    Lovely use of language in this delightful poem. I love it......10
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Poem Submitted: Thursday, September 3, 2015

Poem Edited: Tuesday, September 15, 2015


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