Saturday, November 10, 2007

Lasting Peace Comments

Rating: 5.0

They laid creeping barrage down
in preparation for the push.
It was a pearler Mrs Brown
and turned the battleground to mush.
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ivor or ivor.e hogg
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Ernestine Northover 12 November 2007

It's like another world Ivor, one can only try to imagine the horror of it all. A very well penned piece and I love the last verse it finishes it off beautifully. Very well written. Love and hugs Ernestine XXX

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Thad Wilk 10 November 2007

Another work of art Ivor! Almost felt like i was there! (10) ! ! ! Thad

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Lucianne Fasolo 10 November 2007

Awesome poem, Ivor. Nicely written in flawless meter, as usual, lol. Wars are always awful. It's really sad they still go on popping up around the world...

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