They laid creeping barrage down
in preparation for the push.
It was a pearler Mrs Brown
and turned the battleground to mush.
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Another work of art Ivor! Almost felt like i was there! (10) ! ! ! Thad
Awesome poem, Ivor. Nicely written in flawless meter, as usual, lol. Wars are always awful. It's really sad they still go on popping up around the world...
It's like another world Ivor, one can only try to imagine the horror of it all. A very well penned piece and I love the last verse it finishes it off beautifully. Very well written. Love and hugs Ernestine XXX