Laughing Poem by Elna Nel

Laughing

Rating: 5.0


another day scuffles
along scarcity
along empty wells
and layers of sand
I flutter my eyes
against the burning
of the glaring sun
and through the slits
you fell
barefoot child
with rusted kettle
in your hand
a bundle of sticks
in a yellow dress
laughing

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Pheko Motaung 20 June 2012

A great poem conjuring beautiful images in the reader's smile! Now I want to smile like I am doing now forever thanks to your fantastic healing poem! May posterity guide your hand to continue writing true majestic poems! Dankie tot dusver in alle tye.

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