Sunday, January 3, 2010

Laughing Apace Comments

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a silly little cameo to
tease a smile from otherwise
engaged nonsensicalities
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Ivan Donn Carswell
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Onelia Avelar 13 January 2010

May I just agree with Alison's comment - it is the lightness of a skilful pen which makes this piece brilliant.

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Alison Cassidy 04 January 2010

I love your 'silly little cameo', Ivan. Sometimes the only way to cope is to laugh long and loud. And it's such an Australian attitude too (think of the young men sharing jokes in the trenches) . You move your pen with a light touch and quite a lot of poetic brilliance too. I was particularly taken with: 'it wasn't what I failed which made the grade but how I lived with such certainty' Great piece. love, Allie ♥ ♥ ♥ ♥

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