Leave Me Now Alone Poem by VIPINS PUTHOORAN

Leave Me Now Alone

Rating: 4.8


As I'm not holding you so tightly
You're engulfing me, wounding me,
killing my senses alive,
Stabbing my soul so fatally,
And enslaving my vertebra.
But I beg you to set me free.
For you're the one who loves me the most,
For you're the one who blames me the most,
Though, I dont want you to bear me more,
'Cause I am gonna give me up myself,
Everthing changed but you never!
As for me a lot in my life,
But you never left me behind,
You were always behind me
And caged me in your mirror!
But I love to fly, you never let me so:
Oh! Shadows of my untold life
You're always following me,
In light and twilight
As you're holding me so tightly
But leave me now alone for ever!

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Dead Leaf 25 November 2011

i don't know how to describe these lines....great......very nice

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Harindhar Reddy 01 November 2011

Hello my paisano! Here, thoughts are jotted down with ink of noble passion. Magnanimous write. Yes possessiveness is boon and bane to the society. Engulfing me, wounding me, killing me alive Stabbing my soul so fatally Enslaving my vertebra. When somebody is possessive we complain it he is too selfish. If somebody is not possessive we say he cares me not. Yes human relations are intricate. Anyway by all means appreciate the poets investment of passion. If gotta grade this poem 10 +++++++++++

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Theorem Thetruthserum 29 August 2011

Very nice, my friend. Often my favorite type of poetry is thoughts meant for a journal colorfully painted by a poem. I think it is a poets job to show the vulnerability of he human race as well as the deep truths that lie within. Good job.

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