Leave The Place Poem by Mehta Hasmukh Amathaal

Leave The Place

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What can be the consequence?
If you are given no chance
When one beats his own drum
And another dances and keeps mum

Such is form of obedience
When one is eager to have audience
To take advantage of weak person
For whatever may be the reasons

People go for any compromise
Even forget the cause and breach the promises
This is modern trend and assertion
Where little is cared for the relation

This is exactly what transpires
When two find same empire
Where no resistance is tolerated
Self prophecy is on fore and equated

Poetry is given secondary importance
It becomes just show and little farce too
Owner thinks he is master
Then who cares for readers?

Whatever the case may be
The body is infected and not free
The disease has spread
Mind has become inactive and is already dead

See if you can find free environment
Where your poetical thoughts can make movement
Leave the place if that has become cage
This is the right time with crucial phase

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Mehta Hasmukh Amathalal 12 August 2013

Void Opus3 minutes ago Some rhyming seems forced but keep it up

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Mehta Hasmukh Amathalal 12 August 2013

Interesting Shannon Stark2 minutes ago and well thought out ideas... Comment +1 Potential

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Mehta Hasmukh Amathalal 12 August 2013

Vague Jessica Bowman5 minutes ago Some lines rhyme but sequence of rhyming lines seems to be at random

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Mehta Hasmukh Amathalal 12 August 2013

EmberSkye Deep and true, thank you for sharing-

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Mehta Hasmukh Amathalal 12 August 2013

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Mehta Hasmukh Amathalal 18 August 2013

Bell Noor My cage is safe from all the elements, clean and protected from produced and existing possible contamination, I learned to filter and too the risk to apply knowledge, used it to access experience within, I’m so expert in the ways I did and gained... there worry is that; there is always a reason to go back to cave; may well be to release the prisoners’ to gain access to power over other needless to say, I rather, do that in prison then other...! about an hour ago · Unlike · 1

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Mehta Hasmukh Amathalal 18 August 2013

Giordano Genghini Beautiful style, my friend... [In my opinion, poetry has great importance. It changes the spirit, and the spirit changes the mind, and the mind creates every changing for many many time: slowly, but not only for a few of days, or months, or years...] about an hour ago · Unlike · 1

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Mehta Hasmukh Amathalal 17 August 2013

welcoemsir ricks walker a few seconds ago · Unlike · 1

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Mehta Hasmukh Amathalal 14 August 2013

6 people like this. Hasmukh Mehta welcome sandip a few seconds ago · Unlike · 1

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Mehta Hasmukh Amathalal 14 August 2013

Anurita Singh Words coming from the heart have no linguistic boundaries 4 hours ago · Unlike · 1

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Mehta Hasmukh Amathaal

Mehta Hasmukh Amathaal

Vadali, Dist: - sabarkantha, Gujarat, India
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