Leaving Weak Poem by Carrie Sprouse

Leaving Weak



trembling, cold and scared
weak, pale, and bleeding
you wait for him

while crying alone
unable to wipe away your tears
as air seems to escape

so cold it's painful
and you continue to bleed
as time slips farther away

air has departed
leaving your remains
and still you continue to bleed

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Silence Dogood 12 October 2008

I like the last stanza the most thanks for the great write

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