Final Moments Poem by Carrie Sprouse

Final Moments

Rating: 5.0


tears run down your face
blood runs down your arm
the knife drops to the floor
air is at it's closure

pain runs through your veins
sending fire to your heart
take one last breath
before your final moments part

tremble in sadness
pale, weak, and scared
your vision fades to black
no more air

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Silence Dogood 12 October 2008

A great description of final moments

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Tom Balch 20 August 2008

Well its got to be 10+

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Sarah Abdullah 20 August 2008

Simply Great I loved how Epressive the poem is Thx for sharing

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