Legacy Poem by Jubril Balogun

Legacy

Rating: 5.0


PLeasant words
That brews a smile,
Absolute rhymes
that lits the eye.
Without wings
Stil you'd soar the skies
Whilst the mind floats therein
The bliss born of poetry...
Its a legacy!

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Veeraiyah Subbulakshmi 12 March 2012

You are absolutely right. Let us fly with others...10 marks

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Benjamin Paa Willie 12 March 2012

I love your words. There is flow and meaning. Keep writing and check 'stil' in line 6 unless it is deliberate. Good poem!

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Jubril Balogun

Jubril Balogun

Ogun state, Nigeria
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