Tuesday, June 12, 2007

Les Finale Comments

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now to see birth again
frightened at first and forever till death us part
wings that get torn apart
flown into suns and to ashes a phoenix can
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Jamie Dewyer
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Poornima Kanasen 12 June 2007

Hey ya, You know what, I really like the way your poem flows...Your words are placed in such an eloquent manner..Nice one, my dear! Keep up your good work.. With lots of best wishes and love, K.Poornima...

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