Let Go Poem by Jack Davis

Let Go

Rating: 4.2


Let go of my hand
Let me be what I want to be
Let go of my hand
The sands of time Are trickling before me
I have not yet Achieved
what I want to be
Let go of my hand
I want to stand alone
In a sea of words
Pluck out the phrases
Soar like a bird
I want to stand on a mountain
Wait for the dawn
Yet be aware of
The approaching storm
I want to fashion a rainbow
That arcs through the sky
And iron out the dilemmas
Between you & I

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
NoggerChoc69420 20 November 2019

that poem made me vigourously moan so bad that i pooped my panties and peed them at the same time

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cool kid 21 July 2021

good job

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Jad Karam 08 October 2023

Alright dude, what the flip.

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ED SUPPORT 18 July 2022

Me to

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Ed support 18 July 2022

Yes

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888 30 May 2022

123

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Chinedu Dike 11 October 2021

Well expressed thoughts and feelings. A beautiful creation.......

1 1 Reply
Raj 26 May 2021

Raj Raj Raj Raj Raj Raj Raj Raj Raj Raj

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NEWO 19 May 2021

anyone else doing this for like a school assinment

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cool kid 21 July 2021

yupp

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