Let Go Poem by Jack Davis

Let Go

Rating: ★4.2


Let go of my hand
Let me be what I want to be
Let go of my hand
The sands of time Are trickling before me
I have not yet Achieved
what I want to be
Let go of my hand
I want to stand alone
In a sea of words
Pluck out the phrases
Soar like a bird
I want to stand on a mountain
Wait for the dawn
Yet be aware of
The approaching storm
I want to fashion a rainbow
That arcs through the sky
And iron out the dilemmas
Between you & I

Friday, May 25, 2012
Topic(s) of this poem: rainbow
COMMENTS OF THE POEM
SavageProtato101 04 March 2018

Studying This For Assignment

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Daddy 08 April 2018

I can relate ;)

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dab dab 420 11 June 2018

I can relate too

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BambiHunter69 08 April 2018

I frickin hate English i am from Zimbabwe

12 3 Reply
Ed support 18 July 2022

Yes

1 1 Reply
Chinedu Dike 11 October 2021

Well expressed thoughts and feelings. A beautiful creation.......

1 2 Reply
NEWO 19 May 2021

anyone else doing this for like a school assinment

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cool kid 21 July 2021

yupp

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Tinusha 03 November 2020

What's the theme of this poem?

3 1 Reply
mummy 06 June 2019

i can relate 3 ;)

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