Friday, May 25, 2012

Let Go Comments

Rating: 4.2

Let go of my hand
Let me be what I want to be
Let go of my hand
The sands of time Are trickling before me
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Jack Davis
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Ed support 18 July 2022

Yes

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888 30 May 2022

123

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Chinedu Dike 11 October 2021

Well expressed thoughts and feelings. A beautiful creation.......

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Raj 26 May 2021

Raj Raj Raj Raj Raj Raj Raj Raj Raj Raj

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NEWO 19 May 2021

anyone else doing this for like a school assinment

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cool kid 21 July 2021

yupp

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Tinusha 03 November 2020

What's the theme of this poem?

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NoggerChoc69420 20 November 2019

that poem made me vigourously moan so bad that i pooped my panties and peed them at the same time

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cool kid 21 July 2021

good job

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ED SUPPORT 18 July 2022

Me to

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Jad Karam 08 October 2023

Alright dude, what the flip.

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mummy 06 June 2019

i can relate 3 ;)

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Sunita 28 June 2018

Beautiful was of ironing out differences

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BambiHunter69 08 April 2018

I frickin hate English i am from Zimbabwe

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Zimbabwe Government 14 March 2021

Fellow patron, your support of our nation is truly noted

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SavageProtato101 04 March 2018

Studying This For Assignment

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Daddy 08 April 2018

I can relate ;)

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dab dab 420 11 June 2018

I can relate too

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