Monday, July 2, 2018

Let Me Dream (Inspired By A Post Of Marie Shine) Comments

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I love butterflies,
but I don't want to become a butterfly,
instead I like to become a dense green tree,
with green leaves to counter sun in the hot summers
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Me Poet Yeps Poet 03 July 2018

and part 2....help make our homes in western word fully eastern partially but the most important of all is the greenery it keeps our eyes fresh and lovely all love our eyes firstly then allow us a kiss also on the eyes lovers two and mom and pops when we have too and kiss our progeny its all because of earths trees

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Me Poet Yeps Poet 03 July 2018

Thank god u don't want to be a butterfly it has a very short life we all want you to live long to make us also strong become trees of a forest about the www and spread your lovely knowledge and wisdom We must become such a thing where all will wecome you and me trees give shelter and fruits in abundance trees hold earth together and part 2....

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Khalida Bano Ali 03 July 2018

A lover of nature can make such a lovely promise.

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Kostas Lagos 03 July 2018

A fantastic poem full of beautiful images!

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Red Soul 02 July 2018

An absolutely delightful and charming poem Jawad sahab. It leaves the reader feeling joyful. Thanks for sharing. Have a nice day sir: -) : -)

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The loved one 03 July 2018

Same to you and you and all the ewes, too.

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Robert Murray Smith 02 July 2018

A beautifully crafted write of delight. Nature poems get me everytime.++10

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