M. Asim Nehal

Gold Star - 166,358 Points (26th April / Nagpur)

Let Me Paint Your Portrait ♥ - Poem by M. Asim Nehal

By borrowing - - -)
colours from rainbow
Fragrance from flowers
Gorge and meander from river
Ridges and seracs from mountain
Oasis and mirage from desert
Streams and waterfalls from landscape
Feathers and chisel from birds
And then put the human soul.

Topic(s) of this poem: love

Form: Free Verse

Poet's Notes about The Poem

Meaning of words with brief Explanation
Gorge is a steep-sided river valley which is very narrow and deep.
Meander is a bend in a river.. (This will make her figure very attractive)
Ridges refer to the crests that radiate out and down from a mountain peak (This will make her face unbelievable)
Seracs are exceptionally unstable and can fall at any time without warning (This will truly reflect the mood swings and emotions)

Comments about Let Me Paint Your Portrait ♥ by M. Asim Nehal

  • Abdulrazak Aralimatti (9/20/2015 10:54:00 PM)

    Verily, a lovely poem full of lovely imagery (Report) Reply

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  • (9/20/2015 2:18:00 PM)

    I agree with Sanjukta's comments vividness is very much evident in your poem. (Report) Reply

  • Sanjukta Nag (9/20/2015 10:38:00 AM)

    oh what a beautiful portrait filled with vividness. loved it. (Report) Reply

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Poem Submitted: Sunday, September 20, 2015

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