Sunday, July 9, 2006

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Once I met this girl
She’s pretty and nice
We talked to each other
We had so much in common
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Chris van Maanen
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Ruby Root 09 July 2006

Hi Chris, I think it is so easy to get caught up in this love stuff. Sometimes we don't think with your heads we go with our heart. It is easy to get trapped into things. When the right person comes along I think you will know. I think dating is really hard today. I guess I shouldn't give advice. I will be too negative. Take care Chris great poem and take care.

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Krishna Dasani 09 July 2006

hey chris.. this a lovely poem.. sply the last lines the way you have compared her earing with blades.. its juz so amazing.. gr8 job dude..! ! regards, krishna

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