Hasmukh Amathalal

Gold Star - 497,096 Points (17/05/1947 / Vadali, Dist: - sabarkantha, Gujarat, India)

Liberal Changes - Poem by Hasmukh Amathalal

It is holy space
That we take advantage of human race
Create an environment
For happy moment

Not that I am unhappy
Or dejected already
But recent incidences make me to wonder
Is this the place I wish to live under!

I feel uncertainty around
And no positive thing is found
I refuse to go round
And witness no traces of goodness around

I raise my hands
And pray at the end
Lord give good sense to all people
To live with peace sans bloodbath or struggle

What am I on this beautiful world?
I think no one is correctly told
It is mission with secret message
“Live peacefully with liberal changes”

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  • Mehta Hasmukh Amathalal (3/9/2015 4:57:00 AM)


    Komal Nayak likes this.

    Hasmukh Mehta welcome komal. try to put comment
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  • Mehta Hasmukh Amathalal (3/9/2015 1:11:00 AM)


    Naidz Ladia Hasmukh Amathalal...thanks for the comment-poem oldy...hope ur fine
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  • Mehta Hasmukh Amathalal (3/9/2015 12:57:00 AM)


    It is holy space
    That we take advantage of human race
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Poem Submitted: Monday, March 9, 2015



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