Tuesday, December 2, 2008

Lies Of A Loss Comments

Rating: 3.0

Going away,
I take one last look behind,
And you can't believe those winter days
Were nothing more than lies.
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April Avalon
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This poem has great imagery, metaphorical language, themes, rhyme. It has everything and it is such a great poetic piece. I won my school poetry competion via this poem and I wouldn't regret my choice and I never will.10/10 without a question

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Min Sia 02 December 2008

All lies..so expressive..powerful words! Well penned! A 10!

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