Life Comments

Good poem about a topic so intense and so complex. I am forever grateful to my late mother who showed me every day what caring meant. I really learned how to care and I see the capability to care as one of the greatest assets a human can have.

This has something of an existential feel to it, or hints thereof; which I like. I think you could go even deeper in your exploration of the themes in this poem though. Just a thought. But as a start, very nice.

good work, i liked the ending more than the start. But very good first post

Seems like you took a page out of Walt Whitman's, Leaves Of Grass, well done, rated a ten.