Fayeda Vanimel


Life - Poem by Fayeda Vanimel

'Mother, why papa is so strict...? ! '
'for our betterment, my child..'
'okey..., why you suffer all miseries..? '
': it's my fate...dear...'
'Mother...can't you rub off the fate....? ! ! '
'it's a senseless quest, dear..'
'what do you mean by life....mom, ...? '
'life.....it's these all, my dear child...'
'oh....! mom., how tragic the life is......! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! '


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  • Fayeda VanimelFayeda Vanimel (10/7/2011 7:15:00 AM)

    you are right, Mr.Hans VR.., thankyou (Report)Reply

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  • Hans VrHans Vr (10/6/2011 5:55:00 AM)

    Another very nice write of yours Fayeda,

    I think life is an interplay of fate and will. Our thoughts do have a significant effect on our fate. If we think in a positive way, it will influence how we behave and act. How we behave and act has a very important influence on our 'fate'. So choose to always think positively. Do not allow a negative thought in yoru heart and your 'destiny' may be as bright as you dream.
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Poem Submitted: Thursday, October 6, 2011



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