Wednesday, October 15, 2014

Life? Comments

Rating: 4.8

It is like a time bomb,
It has a timer & waiting to happen.
Someday its going to stop,
With the time and pain gone, I will learn the lesson.
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Meg Cloud
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Jazib Kamalvi 04 October 2017

A sublime start with a nice poem, Meg. You may like to read my poem, Love And Lust. Thank you.

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Chinedu Dike 12 January 2015

A nice piece on life, well articulated and nicely penned. As for the questions, I can only say that all we do is vanity upon vanity. We shall come to see what we must see when we keep our ultimate date with death. A nice poem indeed. Thanks for sharing and do keep it up. Please read my poem MANDELA - THE IMMORTAL ICON.

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