kaki lutta

Rookie - 169 Points (24-03 / Kenya)

Life... - Poem by kaki lutta

With life comes challenges, Abruptly they hit us below the belt, Tears are left on our faces, Piercing pain is felt! ! We fall into an abyss of misery, 'why me..why' we ask ourselves, We send our problems to calvary, Our hearts pierced by a thousand knives! ! Friends who we should run to, Ironically run away from us, Our families of one or two, Turn their backs on us..

Topic(s) of this poem: pain, struggle

Form: Epic


Comments about Life... by kaki lutta

  • Kelly Kurt (11/2/2015 12:25:00 PM)


    Life is this way. A powerful piece, Kaki. Thanks (Report) Reply

    Kaki Lutta Kaki Lutta (11/12/2015 1:03:00 AM)

    thank you Kelly Kurt

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  • Fabrizio Frosini (11/2/2015 7:28:00 AM)


    a lot of pain in your write, Kaki..

    and understand that the format went lost when you posted it.. am I right?
    Is it something like this?
    __________________

    With life comes challenges
    Abruptly they hit us below the belt
    Tears are left on our faces,
    Piercing pain is felt

    We fall into an abyss of misery
    'why me..why' we ask ourselves.
    We send our problems to calvary,
    Our hearts pierced by a thousand knives.

    Friends whoM we should run to
    Ironically run away from us.
    [Even] Our families of one or two
    Turn their backs on us..

    ______________________

    - - pardon me if this was not the format you wanted.. - -

    Cheers
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    Kaki Lutta Kaki Lutta (11/12/2015 1:04:00 AM)

    you are right Fabrizio Frosini

  • Gajanan Mishra (11/2/2015 6:02:00 AM)


    beautiful, piercing pain.. (Report) Reply

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Poem Submitted: Monday, November 2, 2015



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