Life? Poem by Jenna W. Chryste

Life?

Rating: 5.0


My eyes open
only to find
an unfamiliar setting.

I look around
taking in the rubbish
strewn across the floor.

Sensing a change
in the darkness
I know mine eyes hath adjusted.

When suddenly
something catches mine eye -
a drawer.

But ‘twas not the drawer itself -
‘twas an object with sunlight
glinting off it's golden armor.

Taken over by curiosity
I rise
Knowing what must be done.

Tiptoeing closer to the drawer
a wooden floorboard
creaks beneath my weight.

I stop
frozen with fear
my heart racing.

Hearing no threat
I draw nearer
to this mysterious object.

When suddenly
without warning
I fall through the ground.

I scream
knowing in mine head
I cannot be heard.

Although I await
a most certain death
none cometh.

I just keep falling
and falling
and falling.

Until suddenly
I feel something
in mine hand.

‘Twas the golden item
I had gone to fetch -
‘twas still shining.

How odd,
I thought unto myself,
for there is no sunlight.

Then and there
I cautiously unfurl
mine hand.

Being as stupid as I am
I forget I am still falling.

Out it goes
flying away
from mine grasping reach.

It twists
and turns
writhing in gravity's hands.

I then see
what the mysterious object is -
not a key, not a coin, but a turtle.

Soon
this marvelous treasure
is lost to me.

It is lost
in the darkness
as am I.

POET'S NOTES ABOUT THE POEM
Wrote this poem just hours ago when I had an idea and was kind of dazed. If you have any critiques, please comment them! Dedicated to all of those who feel lost and my best friend, Sanju. Inspired by Coldplay and 'Harry & Hermoine' by Nicholas Hooper.
COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Romeo Della Valle 24 July 2012

There always is going to be a new sunshine! This is a very deep and touching write, well Penned and poignant! Thank you for sharing and keep it up! God Bless You! Romeo-NYC

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