Life Poem by Sally Minns

Life



The arms that have held me
The hearts that have love me
Have never been the same
The tears that fall down my face
The pain i have always felt
Are reminders of the past that never goes away
The dreams that run through my mind
The emotions that my eyes hide
Will always be there fo no help will come
The days full of nothingness
The nights that drag on forever
Space and time is all they are filled with
The scars will never go away
The music is never changing
At the wosrt moments time stands still
The only ones to watch
The only ones that hate
Alone when need someone the most
The worrying eyes for others around
The crys and screams of the world

COMMENTS OF THE POEM

to first say about the way the poem flows or the word frame is well done, the poem was nice to read, but to me it sounds so melancholic, sally, life is always not in pain, just because rose has thorns we don't throw it away, we still adore the rose and its beauty always stay... enjoy your life.. next time i want to read a happy life poem from you... hope i will read soon...

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Matt Kephart 10 July 2009

ur not alone. i told you b4. im always here if u need me.

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