Life Poem by liz jumah

Life

Rating: 4.5


life is a narrow stream
draining into the lake
life is like a beam
through the window when you wake
life is a marketplace
where things are sometimes amess
life is like a diamond case
too valuable, it's priceless.

Mysterious life,
shut me down not
with you i want no strife
as i ride in your boat
but listen to me
I have a dream
whose reality I can see
because so bright it seem

Within my short stay
i have a dream for change
a change to cast troubles away
i know my time is a short range
but through my window is a beam
indicating that my dream
though difficult might seem
will come true as i cross the stream

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
G. Alexander 09 September 2009

The write does demonstrate nice analogy throughout What I like most is the hope that you're dream will come true Although you're time here may be short in the grand scheme of things The faith that you're dream of trouble-less days will be realized is hopeful

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Milica Franchi De Luri 04 September 2009

nice analogy through out the poem, i like it

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