Sunday, July 5, 2015

Life-A Mysterious Journey On Earth Comments

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why are we here, on this hanging sphere.
for some special task or it's journey mere.
In swirling bus enjoying intricate world's air,
and finally the soul is taken as a fare! ! !
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Sameer Bangotra
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Sameer Bangotra 07 July 2015

Thankyou so much...but i don't believe in god :)

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Allotey Abossey 07 July 2015

A question everybody needs to personalise. We are all here to accomplish a planed purpose but just a few realize that. Your organization is great and I love it. God bless you for sharing

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Allotey Abossey 07 July 2015

A question everybody needs to personalise. We are each here to accomplish a planed purpose but a few accomplish it. It's sad. God bless you for the deep insight. I love it

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Kelly Kurt 05 July 2015

Our soul as the fare. Wonderful line, Sameer. Thanks for sharing Peace

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Sameer Bangotra 07 July 2015

Thank you for appreciating...it'll boost me up...! :)

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Chinedu Dike 05 July 2015

A question I cannot answer precisely, but for sure we are here for a purpose. A lovely piece of poetry, well articulated and nicely penned with insight. I like the rhyme scheme of the poem. Thanks for sharing. Please read my poem MANDELA - THE IMMORTAL ICON.

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Sameer Bangotra 05 July 2015

Thanks for appreciating.... It means alot to me. And i already read ur poem...its very nice :)

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