Thursday, July 28, 2016

Life As We Know It Comments

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On the sands of a rocky beach
lay a boat docked against the waves,
tied to a trunk, moss-covered and drenched
it remained with the trunk, battling against the relentless waves,
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Swechha Naik
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Jazib Kamalvi 20 November 2017

A refined poetic imagination, Swechha. You may like to read my poem, Love And Lust. Thank you.

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Dr Antony Theodore 28 July 2016

The good old trunk never let go, lest the waves would win and take the boat away...... the trustworthy character of the old trunk always supporting the boat tossed by the waves is an allegorical example of trust, love and the care in times of need......... we as humans can learn a lot from this old trunk.......... thank you.

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Swechha Naik 01 August 2016

Yes, that's what I thought too..you're welcome :)

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Gajanan Mishra 28 July 2016

good old truck never let go, I like it.

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Edward Kofi Louis 28 July 2016

It knew its place. Nice work.

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