life at times do suck!
like beggers who beg for bucks
life at times do kill!
'coz it lacks emotion pills
life at times do bleed!
inspite of graceful deeds
life at times do speak!
of things that wet the cheeks
lif at times go mad!
that it swings our mind so bad
life at times go rude!
that it do spoil ones mood
life at times do scream!
of things that it dont dare to speak in dreams
Ugh! ! Ugh! ! life oh life!
i stand you not anymore!
thnx a lot joshua :) .........n yea we do gotta make the best f it: P
This is a very beautiful poem, it was clearly written, it was deep and emotional, yet it was fun to read, so I give you a 10+++++++++ because it was amazing! ! Great job, you think like I do: P SO don't give up, ffff life, but we gotta make the best of it right? ? ! : p
gud job frnd...bt y'knw....lyf's nt so bad wen u hav frnds lyk me...: P.. right? ? ? ? ?
This poem has not been translated into any other language yet.
I would like to translate this poem
'tis a very beautiful poem////// well-written in a good and ordered manner! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! top marks//////////////